2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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In the developed information age, using computer to deal with affair of the life is normal nowadays. So it is inseparable between computer and man. For example, cellphone is necessity to everyone when they need to use internet every time and everywhere. At 80's time, human being have to use pen to write down the information on the paper. But now it's easy to get any material if you want on the internet. Computer save a lot of time to handle anything.