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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71702
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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A Beactiful City In China Welcome to my hometown,which is Yaan.It's famous for the girl in Yaan,the fish in Yaan,the rain in Yaan,and the environment is fresh and the weather s meld.In addition,the people in Yaan is very generous and entusast. Moreover,there are many place of interest.Such as,BiFeng vially,ShangLi old ttown,JingFengShi.which are all interesting and have different kind of traditional curturals.In BiFeng vially,where is the pandar of hometown,it's extremely cute and lively,at same time,there are abundant animals.For exzaple,lions,bears,elepants and so on.I am sure you well like it,Besides,you well be crazy about chinese drama,which we can go to ShangLi old town,where you can enjoy it! Last but not least,I believe you well visit againe and love it!

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