2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am very happy that my foreign friend is going to visit my hometown .I will take him to the Great Wall,Which is a great built. The Great Wall is located in the capital of china -Beijing and show fantastic society for all over the place.The Great Wall is built in Ming Qing term.In acient times,It used as to ward off stack,In other words,it is play an important to peace with all over the worlds.Nowadays,people think that it is a beautiful place to play.So thousands of people come to here hand in hand .In there, you can see the beautiful sights and realize the development of society . in total, I want to invite you visit The Great Wall simcerely