作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。
There is a commonly old saying goes that the fact is whatever having been seen and heard.However,I view it a bit differently. To make a decision directly according to what having seen and heard is usually unwise especially when we are in virtual life.Every time when we click in someone's facebook,the amazing pictures of themselves which are just special products of photoshop often astonish us and confuse us with the idea that they are very pretty.Forthmore,we couldn't reach the simple outcome from the seeming facts when we analyse the phenomenon.Many factors contribute to the complicated phenomenon at most cases,which need be dealt with from the surface to the deep rote.Only in this way can we find the real. Therefore,making a right judgement need to focus on the facts behind whatever having been seen and heard.
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