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Dear David, Thank you for being concerned about using . environment-friendly shopping bag. In fact, more and more people begin to using environment-friendly shopping bag, beacuse of the pollution. They start to be concerned about environment, so some people have a idea , which they make the environment-friendly shopping bag. It's useful for people to protect the environment. In my views,we should protect the environment by ourselves at any time. What's more, we must realize the importance of the environment and take more actions to protect it. If we can do it, I believe our home will be better and better.
