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文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
With the development of science and technology, the internet becomes more and more popular for everybody.But as for the usage of internet, different people have different opinions. There are two opposite views among people that we found. On the one hand, some people think the internet is helpfui for our study. our study or work will fininsh effectively with the help of internet. But there also is someone hold the different idea,that is, nowadays ,more and more students are addicted to computer games and it seriously affect their studies. As far as i'm concerned, everything has two sides and internet is not an exception.What we should do is to make good use of internet and minimum its shortcoming to the lowest.
