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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法知识扎实，但文中从句数量稍显不足；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
With the development of science and technology,the internet becomes more and more popular for everybody.But as for the usage of the internet, different people have different opinions. There are two opposite views among people that we found. On the one hand,some people think the internet is helpful for our study.Our study or work will finish effectively with the help of the internet.But there also is a different idea that someone hold,that is,nowadays,more and more students are addicted to computer games and it seriously affects their studies. As far as I'm concerned,everything has two sides and internet is not an exception.What we should do is to make good use of internet and minimum its shortcoming to the lowest.
