高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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Great changes had taken place in my hometown.In the past,my hometown's surroundings is so beautifu that the trees can be seen everywhere and the river is full of fishes.The house of people is simpe and the street is crowded because of poor.At present,the buildings is in the place of the trees or farm.What's worse,cars are driven in the street,and the enviorment became worse and worse.Also the trees reduce ever minutes.We can't see the fishes swim in the river.So we must take measure now.