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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文中词汇表达使用较丰富,部分学术词汇的使用比较灵活,单词拼写方面要继续努力;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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it is unwise to get congraulations once seeing or hearing problems.everything should be thought again and again. as saying as goes on:every coin has two sides.that means every problem also has two sides.therefore,facing any problems we should be cautious and calm.for example,when we see a commom or ugly people,it's wrong that suppose him or her is stupid or evil.on the contrast,they may be extreamly smart and excellant.this tells us that everyone has own advantages and value.we should learn to find out their advantages. obviously,a mature person should think deeply than others,even observes the hiding side.at the same time,a nice congradulation should be attached on deep-thoughts. from my perspective,we should abandon jujice on anything or anyone.it's wise to think fully about everything.only this way,we can get a correct or copelet congradulation.

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