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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17432
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分64.0分
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作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量,注意几处拼写错误;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织;建议平时练习中,多多背诵一些好的句子和文章;请注意分段。

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History has entered into 21st century.As all know,computer has played important role in our life .From the rocket ignited into heaven to online shopping,our scientific development,production,conversation even everything are relation to computer.computer relieives our labor force and promotes our society' process,improves our life.In some situations,computer can take place of men to complete special massion.It can't be denied that our daily life don't leave computer.However,computer also bings us some trouble.we are too rely on computer that what we want to do to complete by it to be lazy more and more .some people are addicted to computer game day and night but dou't refuse to study.We are becoming a "computer man" and be controled by computer.So,we shoud healthly take advantage of computer.

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