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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
文中用词稍显贫乏；采用了一些简单的从句；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。
From: hubin@163.com To: KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject: To establish business relationship Dear Sir or Madam We knew your new product 5670 in the exhibition on New York, during Dec 15th to 22cnd, i am very interest it. Please send a price list and instruction to us, we are expecting to receive your reply and hoping to establish business relationship. Seresly
