文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
Great changes had taken place in my hometown. In the past,my hometown's surroundings is so beautiful that the trees can be seen everywhere and the river is full of fishes.The house of people is simple and the street is crowded because of poor. At present,the buildings is in place of the trees or farm.What's worse,cars are driven in the street,and the environment became worse and worse.Also the trees reduce ever minutes.We can't see the fishes swim in the river.So we must take measures now.