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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear Sir or Madam: We knew your new product 5670 during a exhibition held in New York on a date of Dec 15th to 22rid. i was quit interested it . Please send us a price lish and intruduction. Thank you to attention, We are hoping to establish business relationship with you. we are looking forward to your reply. Sincerely Hubin
