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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

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There is no doubt that it is sensitive to get answer whatever you seeing and listening. Newadays we lives in an era of the wealth of information. you must see more and listen more. Nevertheless,we can sure that the information is real and the answer is true. Presently,more an more people always think that fast is effective,which can accelerate make their mission over.when they see an important and useful information. they think it is must a finally answer.But when the ending,they think that their conclusion is wrong.For instance , some people listen a good news about get more money and many people also believe it ,but fist you should give some money to the company. If you do it fast and quickly, congratulations,you will lose this money .Thus this is a experience. When it comes to me ,i argue that whatever what we do, we must think it completely.if we do not think enough ,we must responsibility for our behavior.

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