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【题目要求】
Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.【题目分析】
注意，不一定要选择taking risks or chances或者careful planning二者之一的。比如可以这样写; 有时候为了成功是应该冒一些必要的风险，为了成功详尽的计划也是必需的。但是我认为为了成功，坚持是最重要的文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；请注意分段。
As we comed the world full of confused and intense compete,we always seek for the access to the success.How to get there?The first come into you mind maybe a careful planning or taking risks.In my view,i think that the important things is believe what you think and do what you think.Such as,the finder of DNA structure-Watson, James Dewey and Crick, Francis Harry Compton.At strat,they just made up the model of DNA structure which make sense in theory.But they can not prove it and all was made up.Even that they believe it and cost a lot of time to prove it by any ways.Then suddently they turned out right. No matter how wonderful and detail plan,everything is changing all time.But the faith in you heart would never change if you stand which could lead you come into the way of success.
