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文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。
Dear David, Thank you for being concerned about using the environment-friendly shopping bag. In fact, more and more people begin to use environment-friendly shopping bag, because of the pollution. They start to be concerned about environment, so some people have ideas, which they make the environment-friendly shopping bag. It's useful for people to protect the environment. In my views,we should protect the environment by ourselves at any time. What's more, we must realize the importance of the environment and take more actions to protect it. If we can do it, I believe our home will be better and better.
