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作者词汇基础不错，在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；全文结构较为严谨；若注意一些句子错误，文章会更漂亮。
There are increasing reports about the negative and serious effects to nature going with human activities. Some individuals inevitable consider that it is too late to take measures to solve those issues, while the opposite argue that human still can take some effective actions to ease those problems. In the following, both sides are discussed and later I will show my opinion. The negative group say that actions taken now are useless for two main reasons. On one hand, the natural contaminated area are so large compared to those measurements, which means the actions taken are more like few drops in the sea. On the contrary, it would make some individuals feels markup could be taken, which push them to do more damage to nature. On the other hand, most of the actions need a great deal of money, which could be used in other needy area, such as reducing famine and consolidating dams to reduce flooding. What is more, the effects by the actions need a long time to see. Hence who knows which one is good one. Therefore, actions are not so useful due to subtitle and uncertainty. However, others point out it is worth to take actions to release the damage we did to the earth. Firstly, there is an old saying goes, to be late is better than never. Presumed that we don't take any actions, the situation will definitely be worse and worse. To the contrary, what we take now would make tomorrow better even they are time consuming. Secondly, although the cost of our actions are high, it is worth for a better life and a better tomorrow which is benefit for our generations and a big issue for human' s existence. Generally speaking, those actions are matters to the earth and our generations. To conclude, it is worth to take actions now instead of standing by. It is reasonable to take some actions than doing nothing, which are likely to lead to a better future. While doing nothing only could cause worse world. What is more, a better environment matters to livings. Hence, it is necessary to take actions from now on.
