题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇,有基础拼写错误,需要注意一下;文中衔接词丰富;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;请注意分段。
With the rapid development of technology ,people more and more rely on computer.The usage of computer have two sides.On the one hand ,it makes people's life become convenient and abundant,on the other hand ,much more people addicted to website,therefore ,consume a large number of time and lead to many undergraduate fail to study. As for as I'm concerned,only proper use computer technology ,we can have a splendid future.Because website have a lot of information and papers,it is necessary for us to learn study well.However ,if you abandon yourself to playing computer games or do some useless things,it is equal to wasge life and you will be nothing.