2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦40:My Favorite Festival

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As far as my concerned,my favorite festival is the Spring festival.The reason that I like it is that the day is so important in our culture. It is universally acknowledged that the Spring festival is a traditional festival which is celebrated from ancient time.Apart from that,there are so many customes such as playing fireworks and eating dinner together.what is more,what makes children delighted is that they can wear new clothes on that day.Of course,we will also be dressed in suits.In addition,what I think is the warmest time is that famlies get together to have dinner.In my memories,we have little time spend with our parents,so I really cherish these period. All in all,the Spring festival is meanful in my heart.There is no denying the fact that the day which is important to all chinese impress me all the time.