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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦40:My Favorite Festival

发布时间:2014-07-31 17:51浏览次数:637
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书面表达。源假如你是王昆,你的美国网友Tom对中国的传统节日“春节”非常感兴趣,请你以“My Favorite Festival”为题,写一封E-mail.,给他做一介绍。
1.要点包括:节日简介、节日准备、节日活动等;
2.字数要求:100字左右。
3.提示:the Spring Festival, traditional, get together, clean up, be dressed in…


Subject: My Favorite FestivalFrom: Wang Kun


Dear Tom,


Wang Kun
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拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

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As far as I am concerned,I like the Spring festival.The reason that I like it is that the day is so important in our culture. It is universally acknowledged that the Spring festival is a traditional festival which is celebrated from ancient time.Apart from that,there are so many customers such as playing fireworks and eating dinner together.What is more,what makes children delighted is that they can wear new clothes.Of course,we will also be dressed in suits.In addition,what I think is the warmest time is that families get together to have dinner.In my memories,we have little time spend with our parents,so I really miss these periods. All in all,the Spring festival is manful in my heart.There is no denying the fact that the day which is important to all chinese impress me all the time.

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