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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9046[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中词汇表达灵活多样,可是学术词汇使用较少;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

Ii is said that the value of life lies not in the length of days, but in the use we make of them.We have only one life,so it is necessary for us to do some meaningful things to spice our lives.however, maybe some of us will wonder what we should do to lead a meaningful life. Let me take Nobel for an example.As a one of the most greatest physicists,Nobel devoted himself to the science.He lived for people and tried his best to do someting for the society no matter how difficult the life is.He suffered from lots of difficulties in the process of the experiments.He did the experiments day and night,which made him in a bad condition. He also led a poor life and even had no money to see a doctor when he was ill.What's worse,his brother died in one of his bomb experiments,which made him fall into great pain.Although go through so many troubles,he never gave up his faith.What he did means a lot to the society.He also donated all of his possion to government in order to encourage more and more people focus on the science,peace,literature and so on. He set a good example to us to lead a meaingful life. As a university student, we should have a good plan for our lives and try our best to do some useful things.It makes no sense for us to waste the time in sleeping and playing games.We can read some books that teach us how to be a excellent person.And we can challenge to some new things and we should focus on the charity.We can change ourselves from small things.For example,give our hands to those in need and be a qualified person,care for the public facility.

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