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作者词汇表达较多样灵活，也能较准确地使用学术词汇；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
With the technology developing rapidly,more and more information is coming around us.Though our resources are abundant,we are less attention to the value of information.There is saying goes well"everything has two coins."The following is my view. For one thing,information can produce positive effects on our lives in more than one way.We will search for anything that we need from Internet as well as learn online.Thus it can be seen we get a lot information in society. For another thing,information may bring about negative impacts on our lives.Such like a series of computers are widespread,however,people are regarded them as"that's just as it should be".Therefore,people never make any choices about them to learn.Of course,it has bad impact on our normal lives.Especially younger,they are addicted in the games at Internet.Therefore,it cause reducing their grades.Obviously,we are obliged to gain information which is beneficial for us. In conclusion,information will make our life more enjoyable,that is to say,information can add color to the dull routine of everyday life.The premise is that we should seek useful information from the society and pay attention to a wealth of information.
