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I am so delighted to hear that you will visit China.The place which I would like to take you to see is JiuJiang. There is no deny the fact thatthe city is so beautiful place that no word can describe.Aprat from that,the weather there is so warm that you will fall in love with it when you arrive.What is more,the famous mountain,which have several cultures,is localed in JiuJiang.It is universally acknowledged that The Mount Lu is famous for its special scenes and cultures.When you stay here,you will be lost in its beauties.Ancient people like LiBai,who writed articles to describe its antique beauty.Quantities of people,from aboard and home,forget the difficulties and spread no effort to see it fantantic scenes.In addition,the tea in JiuJiang is sold all over the word.When you go to a teahouse,you will get many great memories. On balance,you will have a wonderful time in JiuJiang.
