2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I am so delighted to hear that you will visit China.The place which I would like to take you to see is JiuJiang. There is no deny the fact that the city is so beautiful place that no word can describe.Aprat from that,the weather there is so warm that you will fall in love with it when you arrive.What is more,the famous mountain,which has several cultures,is localed in JiuJiang.It is universally acknowledged that The Mount Lu is famous for its special scenes and cultures.When you stay here,you will be lost in its beauties.Ancient people like LiBai,who writes articles,describe its beauty.Quantities of people,from aboard and home,forget the difficulties and spread no effort to see it fantastic scenes.In addition,the tea in JiuJiang is sold all over the world.When you go to a teahouse,you will get many great memories. On balance,you will have a wonderful time in JiuJiang.I cherish the hope that the scenes in JiuJiang will impress you.