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字数：300 满分：100分
拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用；有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
Study Abroad or In China? When it comes to whether study abroad or in china,different people hold different views.Some people believe that study abroad is the better choose.However,others hold that we should study in china.As far as I am concerned,I would like to study in china. There are two reasons to support my views.On the one hand,just for our family,we can save a lot of money if we study in china instead of study aboard,after all ,we should understand that our parents are very hard to earn money.And if we study in china,we can go home to keep our parents company more,of course,it is acknowledge that family love is valuable.On the other hand,just for ourselves,if we study in china, we don not have to spend time adapting the environment around you, at least,you are in a comfortable atmosphere to study.Besides we can get familiar of our society situation in order to acquire a satisfying job after graduating. All in all,I think it is a better to study in china .At least,in my heart,family love is the most important and I cherish it.And I believe that I can also learn amount of knowledge in china as long as I study hard.
