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2005年考研英语作文真题:A letter to your Mr.Wan

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:55浏览次数:1803
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题目 A letter to your Mr. Wan
说明 Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & fashions. But now you find that the word is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason (s), and making an apology.
要求
1.Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang
2.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.
3.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming” instead.
字数:100满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分67.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

Dear Mr.Wang, I am really reluctant to give up my present job,but I have to quit it. Firstly,I am pleasant to get this job,but I found it doesn't meet the expectation of mine.I want a single office to design and sometimes I need some landscape to create inspiration.But the reality is that I have to share a office with three people,foremost,the office has no wind and has a parking near by.I am disappointed to this. I will be appreciate itl if you could accept my resignation. Yours, Li Ming

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