拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Dear Mr.Wang, I am really reluctant to give up my present job,but I have to quit it. Firstly,I am pleasant to get this job,but I found it doesn't meet the expectation of mine.I want a single office to design and sometimes I need some landscape to create inspiration.But the reality is that I have to share a office with three people,foremost,the office has no wind and has a parking near by.I am disappointed to this. I will be appreciate itl if you could accept my resignation. Yours, Li Ming