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Marry chen, How are you? I am going to travel on business in Beijing tomorrow and I will be there for a week. Because of this, I cannot join in to discuss with each other which is about holding a party in the New Year. But I have not spent time with you for a long time and it is time for me to enjoy with each other a while. Would you tell me which day they will decide to hold the party. Thanks for attention, have a nice day! Li ming
