小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a lot of friends,but only a few good friends,her name is Zoe.She is a very beautiful girl and full sense of humor.we have a lot of interesting the same,like travelling,sporting,and eating.So on holiday,we want out togther,take photos for each other,go shopping.She work hard,we share happiness and sadness togther.I think i'm lucky to have so good friends.