2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My hometown is Tonkun.It's a city which located in south of China.And full of rivers.First of all,I will take you to visit the west gate tower.It's has long history and is an important existing city safety guard.Secondly,we can go to the KeYuan which one of China's four famous gardens.In favour thar we can enjoy China traditional culture.