2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；能够熟练使用从句并合理分配；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇；请注意分段。

As one man said:"what you saw and what you heard are not wise to draw on a conclusion ".let us add weigth to the theory:AIdisheng,who device the light,got through three thousand tries with the same fail cause ignoring the current terrible finds on the outlook side and holding a strong brief that he will work it out.In the end ,he made it. when take messures to deal with the tremendous things,we should keep calm and insist on the thing you do now rather than give it up when all failures assumes in your eyes.