2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

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More and more museum open for free to provide people having a chance studying knowledge well.In the past decade,a few museums opened for free because the government considered that maintain these museums have to cost a lot of money and these costs should be cost by people who have visited.Currently,the government think these museums belonging to everyone.Thus,these museum open for free. Opening museum for free lead some troubles in fact.For instant,more people visit these museums than they not open for free due to it is difficult to protect these museums. One coin has two sides.In my opinion,opening museum free have both of good and bad.The advantage is people can known the history about many subjects.The disadvantage is too many people to visit at the same time maybe ruin the museum.Therefor,we can within amount of people to open museum for free.