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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
评语:

使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;作者词汇量比较丰富,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活,但要避免出现拼写错误;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Chatting online is more and more popular today Not only young people are crazy for it ,but also increasely old people are fond of chatting online .It 's not denined that the internet make our contact frequently and shorten our distance how far away we are . However,Internet has caused some negative impact on interpersonal communication.In the recent year,the use of vulgar language and Internet fraud frequently happend has caused loss of integrity and accomplishment in our society.There is a scene we ofen see that someone frequently play cellphone to reply message on QQ and ignore the companion of conversation at the table.When we are used to chatting on line but we ignore or don't know how to communicate with others in reality. The internet make our life convenient and accelerate our pace of life .It promotes our contact but don't promotes our feeling.

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