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Good mood is important to all of us, is it true? The answer is yes, and of course,it is quite important to our social life. As we know good mood is helpful for our health. Then how can we keep it. In this society, people are surrounded by many kinds of pressure. Like how to get good points on your study; how to do your job well, how to earn money to support your life, how to take care of your parents etc. Under above pressure, if people don't learn how to relex themselves, then they may feel dispointed when they do not do work well , and they can not satisfied with life. That will lead to bad result--make you stay in unhappy mind, even worse, bad mood will make your body and mind ill. According to a survey from a newspaper, good mood can prevent you from cancer attack, which apperently shows that keeping a good mood is very important. Becouse people without healthy body,then they can not work or help others. So excepially we are living in the society with much pressure, we should pay more attention to adjust our mood. Good mood is really important to people.
