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It's not wise that drawing a conclusion immediately after you see or listen something.If you are this kind of person,you should take your behaviour into account. For one thing,you always get the wrong answer if you arrive at a conclusion instantly without more considerations.For example,when you meet with someone at the first time,he treats you in an impolite way,so that he gives a negative impression on you.Nevertheless, as a matter of fact the reason why he treated you impolitely is that he was in bad mood in that day,when you encountered each other at the first time.Therefore he is really not the person what you have in mind.For another thing, the conclusion is always the end of a project or something else.We can't be so slipshod.We must take seriously of it,because we all may not hope that our things are ruined by an incorrect conclusion. In a word,we must be careful when we want to conclude something.Wisdom or imbecility depends on yourself.
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