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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
请作者在词汇丰富度，尤其是在学术词汇的积累上再接再厉；文中从句使用量偏少；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
from: hubin@163.com date: Dec 25th, 2014 to: KPOHsales@hotmail.com subject: establish business relationship dear sir/madam: I knew your new product of No.5670 during the exhibition held in Newyork, I'm evry interested in the product. please send us a price list and instruction. we are expecting establish business relationship. we are looking forward to your early reply. yours sincerely Hu Bin
