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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
评语:

行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, computer has became an important part of our life. It has many functions. For example, we can use it to relax ourselves, we can watch movies, or listen to music, even we can play games; we also can use it to study or get informations on the internet, what's more, some people can work at home because of computer; we also can chat on line through some softwares, regardless of the distance between us. All of above are the advantages of the computer, but, what are the disadvantages of computer? computer occupy us too many times. Computer can bring many good things to us, at the same time, it spends our many times to do these things. Such as communciate with people around us. We depend on computer and are used to talking on line, even lose sight of communication in reality. Little by little, we are disabled from commumicate with people face to face, we unable to examine a man's language and observe his countenance. In a word, I think the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication is bad, we should communicate with people in reality more, rather than communicate on line.

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