拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Do you think it wise that putting all eggs in one basket?Maybe everyone has their own idea about this question.From my perspective,it isn't so much a wise behaviour as silly thing.Presuming that you put all eggs in one basket,you will lose all eggs once you fall down.The following is my reasons whyI say so. On the one hand, putting all eggs in one basket,which amounts to putting all things together.If so,you will find that things becomes more intricate than before.In contrast, if you separate small parts from all things,things will be less complex.On the other hand,putting all things together put more pressure on you.You will feel depressed,so that you will have a feeling that you cannot succeed in doing with these things. To conclude,we'd better solve problem one by one than put it together,Putting it together cut down your confidence and patience,which amounts to announce u defeat.Therefore,it is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.