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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17432
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章层次较为清晰。

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Nowadays with the rapid development of advanced technology, computer becomes more and more significant for the human being.Numerous things can be done by merely one computer.Computer even can do sth that man can't reach. The man can control other machines by operating one computer to manufacture products and get in touch with others.We have hardly conceived that if there are no computers.What's more,computer boosts not only the economy but also the rest facets of our life. For all of these,it sparks a hot discussing whether computer can control man in the near future time.The answer is absolutely negative.Computer is efficient and useful in industry and other fields,essentially,it is a machine.The machine will be broken someday.Thus,computer will never ahead of the man.

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