2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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I would like to advice him to visit the Yangkou beach,which is the most interesting place in Qingdao as I think. there is not many tourists there in Yangkou,because it's not a famous tourist attraction.Therefore,the ocean and beach there is very clean and beautiful,and you will find peace and joy there.What's more,the famous Mount Lao is near to the Yangkou beach,so you can conveniently climb the mountain whenever you want. There are many interesting things you can do on this beach.You can play football and volleyball on the golden and soft sandbeach.If you are good at swimming,just jump into the sea and have fun.If you are interested to cooking,you can barbecue here by yourself!You can also clmib the Mount Lao whenever you want! What an interesting place!welcome to Qingdao and welcome to Yangkou beach!