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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12940
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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复杂句的使用不是很丰富;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

用户练习作文:

From this picture,we know the parents are chating with their daughter by computer. And express they miss she very much . With the development of science and technologe ,a lot of people have computer,and many people are likely to communicate with others by electronic instead of face to face. There are some reasons. Firstly, it is convenient by computer talk with others. Secondly, it can save time for businessman.Thirdly, it can easely express than face to face. But on the other hand, there also some disadvantage.Because it can't see the people's expression by internet. In my opinion. I think face to face contact is more important than by electronic comunicate.

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