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Taking a look around our daily life,we can never fail to figure out the fact that those people who feel desired to success.However,it is universally knowledge that the awesome life does not defeat others but super ourselves.This is exactly what someone once said:"The greatest use of life is to spend it on something that will outlast it." There are some compelling reasons to evidence this issue.Initally,an overwhelming majority of human beings bury in working or study,which they maintain that it is the greatest use of their life.However, they just waste time to something uselessly,which pathetically and undoubtedly considered controversial or even unreasonable.The use of knowledge of utmost important.Only can we take advantage of knowledge,we truly obtain it.In addition,An excellent life must be based on continually learning and improving.Dr.Dravid from Peking university reveals a survey that the person who learn all their life have great chance to achieve their dream. The greatest use of life,for my personal perspective,plays an essential role on our life.It's no exaggeration to say that a right notion and method can guide us to the right routes which how to have a meaning life.
