2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear friend : I am glad that you will pay a visit to my hometown ,I am blessing to take you a good trip of my hometown . As we all known ,,Beijing not only is the capital of China but a very beautiful city ,it known for the food ,the sceney, etc. To my view ,The Tiananmen squere should not miss ,in ancient China ,the empior lives in that ,i am sure that it can give you a fantastic memory ,Secondly ,the museum ,the art galary is second famous only to the Tiananmen squere,in that place ,you can enjoy the famous art pictures ,which can keep you a good mood . In short ,I wish you can have a good trip.