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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9027
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

With the development of science and technology, the use of computer become more and more popular.Even some students by use computer to study. As we all know, the computer is play an important role in our life and study.We can search something that we don't know by computer.And it is beneficial to broaden our horizons.But there are some advantages and disadvantages about use internet on learning.On the one hand, it is convenient for us to study wherever we are,and it is good for some students whom are don't like speech in class.But on the other hand,its lack of communication between teachers and students.Besides,it is difficult for teachers to know whether the students understand. As far as I am considers,internet on learning isn't make us happy study,and it is not get other skills except the knowledge.So I don't think education simply means learning obtain information.

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