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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分54.5分
评语:

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩;文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

用户练习作文:

In the picture present to us ,there is parents writing to their child that he should down and eat someting.It obvious that more and more young people draw much attention to play on the Internet. As we all know that the development of Internet is so fast that we have lot of time to stay with our prents and friends.We becomer lonly day by day. If we always do like this we must lost our more important ability that fruntly speak to others.So we must cut down the time on Internet. The next but not the last,cumpeture also take some convience to us,example, it can quickly show some importent news when we need them .Above all ,we should do well on the Internet as possible as we can.

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