作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次较为清晰;文中有较多拼写错误,请作者增加词汇量的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend,he is good,righteousness ,mercful and so on.He awlays help me when I was in trouble.For example:I was miss,and he helped me found the right way to home.And he always gives me gifts about everything he has, his son is contained,and leads me walk in a right road.