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I was glad to hear that you will come to Chain,my beautiful home land. I would invite you my hometown where i have living about 20 years. At here, you could see some beautiful trees which you must have never saw.The trees can change four color in one day,and the lever is very long, just like a rule. if you have saw it, you would feel image.After the trees ,here some builds were were very interesting.it is different from builds in your country ,even different from some model builds in our city. It was hard to say clear. here a so many interesting thing that you must interested. So when you come, I would take you to visit all the beautiful place; I am looking for your come. I am waiting here.
