2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文章词汇表达丰富，若多用学术词汇多检查几遍单词拼写就更好了；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

As is vividly shown in the picture,a man says:I have a note from my doctor saying that I am allergic to criticism.Obviously,he does not want to accept others' criticism,In this day and age,this phenomenon is not uncommon.While it is in its infancy,it does deserve our urgent attention. Everyone will have a mistake even a great but it is hardly discovered by oneself sometime.The bystander,however,could clearly finds you problem who is capable to remind or help you to orrect it.In addition,you are likely to sorely dysphoric when your parents contiual chatter you owing to a petty thing you suspect.In fact,those suggestions root in their experience will have profound impact on you life. Unpleasant advice is a good medicine.The public place a high value on accepting others'criticism.Only in this way can the prospectd of our life journey be brighter.