2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文中词汇表达灵活多样，可是学术词汇使用较少；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

As is vividly shown in the picture,a man says:I have a note from my doctor saying that I am allergic to criticism.Obviously,he does not want to accept others' criticism,In this day and age,this phenomenon is not uncommon.While it is in its infancy,it does deserve our urgent attention. Everyone will have a mistake but it is hardly found by oneself sometime.The bystander,however,could clearly points out you problem who is capable to remind or help you to correct it.In addition,you are likely to sorely dysphoric when your parents contiual chatter you owing to a petty thing you suspect.In fact,those suggestions root in their experience will have profound impact on you life. Unpleasant advice is a good medicine.The public place a high value on accepting others'criticism.Only in this way can the prospectd of our life journey be brighter.