2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

As is vividly shown in the picture,a man says:I have a note from my doctor saying that I am allergic to criticism.Obviously,he does not want to accept others' criticism,In this day and age,this phenomenon is not uncommon.While it is in its infancy,it does deserve our urgent attention. Everyone will have a mistake but it is hardly found by oneself sometime.However,the bystander could clearly point out you problem and then help you to correct it.In addition,you are likely to sorely dysphoric when your parents continual chatter you owing to a petty thing you are of name suspect.In fact,those suggestions coming from their experience will have profound impact on you life. Unpleasant advice is a good medicine.The public place a high value on accepting others'criticism.Only in this way can the prospected of our life journey be brighter.