2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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At the picture,we can seem few points. First,the education more high and the unemployment rate more less.but the education more law and the median weekly earning more less. Seconed,only professional degree law of doctoral degree,but the median weekly earning more then dcotoral degree. Thired, highest bachelor's degree,the median weekly earning average more than 1000 dollor. So,we can know,only get the high degree,the unemployment rate be law and the median weekly earning be high.we should more and more workhard to stady,if we want to earning more money.